Hey Wiz! Your story is great and the best thing about this story is that it was a tragic tale. The story was wonderful but at the ending I was confused about Will. You could make more of a story ending for him about what happened or a little backstory.
Hey Wiz!
ReplyDeleteYour story is great and the best thing about this story is that it was a tragic tale. The story was wonderful but at the ending I was confused about Will. You could make more of a story ending for him about what happened or a little backstory.